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Invitation to Wishworth Castle--a compilation novel

 

What is a compilation novel?


A compilation novel is one in which each chapter of the novel is written by a different person. This is the brainchild of a person who wishes to remain hiding in the background while some of us lay the foundation in a real and tangible manner. This zone, therefore, would be that real and tangible foundation.

He came up with the idea not by himself but from Jeff Deaver  who put together a compilation novel with fourteen other authors. We thought it would be fun to form our own group of authors and do our own compilation novel. So, we invite any and all aspiring novelists who wish to have some fun to join our sundry group.

Just a few addendums and caveats.....

We should go over a few things before we start:

  • Continuation of plot

This is rather important, possibly the most important element of this project and must be adhered to. It is one novel with one story even if there are several people writing it. Yes, there can be subplots and diversions but in general the plot must have continuation.

As such, we all have to agree to keep the story going with deference to former chapters. That is to say, if the main character is allergic to shrimp in chapter 2 she/he can’t suddenly start eating shrimp by the bucket load in chapter 13 with no repercussions. That may seem like a minor point but you must see the importance of keeping things straight. There must be consistency. It’s things like that which make or break a novel. Of course, it is the editor's job to ensure this. That being said, it shall fall on me to make certain all fits properly and I ask for your indulgence.

  •         Genre

Having a set genre is not needed here. It really doesn’t matter  if the story starts off as a mystery then takes a turn into romance and then another to fantasy.

  •      Length of each chapter

Here we may have some leeway, but in general we should keep to the Helium standards of 4-6 page/ 1,400-1,800 word limit per chapter. That way there is not too much of a burden for any of us. We do have lives after all…most of us, anyway!

 

Some provisos.....

  •         Editing.

In keeping with the spirit of consistency, there must be an editor -in-chief in charge of maintaining integrety of this project. Here we must all agree to allow our work to be reviewed and edited for typos, any grammar mishaps and consistency of plot by the zone managers. It would be difficult if not impossible for all involved to have editing duties. Knowing this, before a chapter is posted to Helium I ask that it be sent to me first. This way I can make sure it complies with former chapters and has no typos. After approval is obtained, then the chapter will posted on the Invitation to Wishworth Castle zone and promoted on Facebook and Twitter.

  • Posting chapters at Helium.

Each chapter must be posted to a novel excerpts title at Helium’s creative writing channel. The title can be new or existing. I can help with finding or create a proper title to which to post if need be. But as each chapter will likley be written by a different person, it would be perfectly and possibly advisable to post each chapter in the same "In the castle" title. Up to the individual, of course, but it is advised to start each chapter with: From the compliation novel Invitation to Wishworth castle, chapter #?. Also put this as the URL for added visibility.

And stipulations….

  •         Assigning chapters

This, I believe, should be first come, first served. Or if you prefer, pick a number and that chapter will be reserved for you.  That way, if you simply don’t have an idea to follow chapter 6, then you can wait for one that spurs your imagination.

  •         Time

There should be a set time for each writer to write up and finish the chapter assigned to them. To make things easy on all, I say 2 weeks.

  •         Joining.

Joining the group is easy as pie. Just leave a comment at the bottom of this zone saying, “Yes, I want to join and write a chapter!” Don’t worry that you have to decide right away to do this. You can subscribe to the zone and even join in on discussions even if you do not commit to doing a chapter. Like I said before, you may decide to join when a particular chapter you read spurs your imagination. No worries, no fuss, no pressure.

  •         Fun factor

This is purely for fun and shouldn’t be a stressful experience. (Hence, the no worries, no fuss, no pressure from above.) If we agree to keep things light and breezy and not start taking this too seriously, all should go well.

  •         Promoting the project

We hope to have loads of people read our compilation novel so, do tell your friends and family. They may actually like what we’re doing and tell more people. And soon we’ll be the talk of the internet….okay so I’m delusional, sue me! But that’s okay, we’re here to have fun while putting together a novel. People may stop by to see what we’re up to or they won't.

No matter. At least we'll be here and that may have to be enough. But who knows? With enough people getting interested in what we’re doing here, this novel may attract more authors wanting to join us. Then this novel may actually go on ad infinitum. What fun!

  • Chatting encouraged

We will have a companion discussion thread for any on-going talks about this project, for feedback, ideas and suggestions. Don’t be afraid to ask questions, make suggestions and/or speak your mind.

How the story begins.....

 Invitation to Wishworth Castle

Chapter 1: A real castle

 

Utterly mesmerized Chad stared through the dusty windshield of the car.

“Can you stop a minute, please?” he asked the driver.

“But we’re almost there,” the driver protested, looking nervously around them.

“Well, I can see that,” Chad said a bit irritable, but all that vanished when the car pulled over to the side of the road beside the wide, free-flowing river and he stepped out. “I just want to….take it all in. It …it truly is a real castle. I was thinking…..”

He truly couldn’t say what he had been thinking. He pulled the invitation out of his pocket and read it for what must have been the hundredth time.

 Chad Henderson,

You have been invited to Wishworth Castle for an all-expenses paid, month-long holiday. Enclosed you will find your airline ticket and all information relevant to the journey to and stay at Wishworth Castle. Here’s hoping you find your heart’s desire at Wishworth Castle. Best wishes.

And that was all she wrote, Chad thought. No signature, no return address, no phone number, no nothing, in fact. And as for the “relevant information”, there was not much of that either. Nothing about the place, not even what country it was in. Even the airline ticket was of no use. It was just another note on the same heavy parchment stating which gate to take a chartered, privately owned jet. And if he had thought someone on board would fill him in about their destination, he was sorely mistaken. He had been the only passenger.

As for the “your heart’s desire” part, he scoffed at that one. Could this mystery castle give him that? He seriously doubted it.

He had no clue what this was all about, nor who could have possibly sent him such a generous offer. It had occurred to him that the invitation was all a joke, that it would be a dump of a resort with hidden and exorbitant costs, that it was a mere ruse or trap and that he would be kidnaped and held for some ludicrous ransom, a huge amount of money. Well, the laugh would be on the kidnaper or resort manager, wouldn’t it? He had nary a penny left to his name and he valued his life not a bit. He had nothing to live for anymore.

Not after this horrible last year. His best friend embezzled from the company Chad had built up from nothing and he left the country with Chad’s supposedly grieving wife. The bank took Chad’s home, his business, the taxman was after his blood and he wasn’t even a dad anymore. At least, he thought so.

He made a mental note not to refer to Henry as his best friend any longer and he most certainly wished never to think of Jenna again….the rotten little….

He sighed and shook his head of such useless, negative thoughts. She had, after all, been the love of his life once and he couldn’t forget that she had given him the greatest gift, Jason. She had also, however, managed to take him away. Again he shook his head. It had been an accident, a misstep, no one’s fault. He mustn’t continue to blame her for Jason’s disappearance. It could just as easily have happened to him. Somehow, though, he doubted it. He always took more care of their child than she ever did.

He gazed up at the castle again. The impressive edifice rose up on a slight hill, all turrets and towers in soft hues of pale blue and slate gray. It looked too perfect to be real in the early dawn light. It was surrounded by a wide, crystalline moat of sorts. Not an actual moat he saw now. The castle stood on an island within the wide gently flowing river. The water reflected the castle in a perfect mirror image with the early morning mist rising seductively around it, slightly obscuring the enclosing mountains in the distance. The sun rising behind him glinted off the tower room windows and cast a golden glow over the entire scene.

He realized he could stand there looking at it forever if allowed. It was that beautiful. “Dear God, is this what heaven is like?” he whispered.

“Mister Henderson?” the driver said several minutes later.

Chad looked around and started. He had forgotten all about the driver. He gave his head a shake and jumped into the compact car. “Sorry, guess you must get that a lot from us Americans. We got no castles like that back home.”

The driver said nothing and pulled into the road which twisted and turned much as the river beside it did. The trees they passed, Chad noticed, had become older, more gnarly and contorted as they drew closer to the castle. Watching them, his mind went back to the last time he and Jason had gone hiking into the woods.

“Uh, Dad, you sure there’s no spiders in there?” Jason had asked in a tiny, quivering voice for the tenth time in as many minutes, his small hand clutching at his father’s for dear life.

Chad knew his son was thinking of the giant spiders Harry Potter and his friend Ron had encountered on their own excursion into the forbidden forest. He rather regretted reading Jason that story for it scared him silly. But even with the ever more frightening tales, Jason couldn’t get enough of them and nor could Chad. He just enjoyed reading with the boy, whose light brown eyes would widen as the story progressed until you thought his whole face was only his eyes.

Chad laughed and gave him a reassuring squeeze of the hand before saying, “Now, what have I told you about those giant spiders, Jason?”

“They’re not real, but what if…”

“Exactly. Not real, as in they do not exist. Only in JK Rowling’s imagination do spiders talk and grow to be as big as cart horses,” Chad interrupted.

“And mine too,” Jason muttered under his breath. Chad laughed and scooped him up onto his shoulders. He then took another trail which hugged the edge of the tiny stream and led away from the disturbing wooded area that so frightened his boy.

Thinking of that time brought unexpected tears to his eyes and he had to blink them back. How he missed that boy! And not knowing if he were alive or dead made it that much worse.

Out of the corner of his eye, he caught some movement and he turned in time to catch a glimpse of a blond haired boy of about six running through the trees. His heart jumped into his throat and he almost shouted for Jason. The boy had looked just like him. But then sanity returned. It couldn’t possibly be Jason, he told himself.  But for the next mile he couldn’t help but look into the trees hoping for another sighting.

His heart was still pounding hard when the car took a sharp turn to the right. They were now on the narrow drive leading to the castle drawbridge. Ten yards in, the car stopped.

“What’s wrong?” Chad asked the driver who put the car into park and swiftly jumped out opening the trunk and extracting Chad’s suitcase. Chad followed looking confused.

“End of road,” the driver said dispassionately, handing him the bag and dashing back into the car.

“Hey, I didn’t even…..”Chad was saying just as the car spun around, spewing tiny pebbles everywhere and tore back down the road.

 “Give you a tip,” Chad finished too late, for the car was already around the bend and out of sight. “What the hell was that about?”

With no one there to give him a proper answer, he turned toward the castle and walked across the drawbridge, all the while wondering about the odd behavior of the driver. But all thought of the silly man vanished as soon as he approached the castle in all its splendor. It was even more impressive up close.

He climbed the granite steps and entered a magnificent foyer. Several minutes he stood slowing turning, taking it all in, until he realized he should sign in. He frowned when he found nothing like a counter or even a desk and there appeared to be not a soul in sight. What he did see, however, was his name neatly written on a note card made of the same heavy parchment as the invitation sitting on a low table. An old fashioned brass key lay on top. He picked them up and read.

Chad Henderson, Your bedchamber is at the top of south tower. Best wishes.

“That’s it?” Chad said out loud, turning the card over to see if there was more on the backside, his voice echoing off the rough stone walls. “And how am I to find this south tower?”

As if in answer to his query, a slip of paper fell out of the note he still held. He bent to retrieve it and found a map of sorts telling him precisely how to get to his room.

“Alrighty then,” he muttered and bounded up the wide curving marble stairs. He’d lost count of the floors he passed when he finally reached the top. But there were two doors here. The first he tried wouldn’t open with his key but the second did without a glitch and he entered his room. And what a room it was!

“Holy fricken cripes,” he mumbled. He gaped at the huge four poster bed complete with midnight blue velvet hangings. Two matching step stools sat on the floor on either side of the bed. As tall as he was he’d still need them to get on the high mattress. Opposite this stood an intricately carved dark walnut wardrobe. Fabulous tapestries covered the walls and a large mirror stood sentinel in the corner.

“Jenna would love this,” he muttered.

The only thing that boded ill was the small stand on which stood an old fashioned porcelain basin and pitcher, just like you’d expect to find in old places without a proper bathroom. He looked around almost fearful to find a chamber pot, but then he spotted an adjoining door and he lunged for it hoping against hope for a real bathroom.

“Yes!” he shouted, triumphant, and started ripping off his clothes. It had been, after all, a very long travelling day.

Once revived with a long hot shower, Chad dressed in khaki shorts and a polo shirt. Staring out the window he knew he should be tired and ought to take a nap but he didn’t want to be inside on such a glorious day. He was wired up and he felt his .....read more.

Chapter 5: Scars by April May Maple

Artemesia sighed in relief as she shut the door to her room. She was finally free of Chad. It wasn’t that she didn’t like him personally, she just didn’t like men in general. So far she had perfected her act of courteous politeness to hide her uneasiness. Still, there was something about Chad that made her want to let her guard down. It could be that sad, far-off look in his eyes that made her think he was searching for something that he didn’t think he could find.

“Calling me Arty, what gall? He doesn’t even know me!” She mused to herself in an attempt to quiet the inner voice hinting that he might not be so bad.

She was grateful for the warm bath that had already been drawn for her and left a light hint of magnolias in the air. It comforted her and let her finally relax. Since she had been free from her childhood, she had spent most of her life avoiding men and to be stuck in a castle where she had only seen men caused her to proceed with extreme caution.

As she undressed, her eyes glanced into the mirror and she grimaced at the terrible scars that marred her perfectly toned stomach. The scars were always in places that clothes concealed, but the worst of the scars were engraved in her heart. Sometimes she wondered if they would ever heal.

God had graced her with a beautiful face and corn silk hair which most girls had envied, but to her the price for such features came too high. Her frail body had not been strong enough to ward off the men that desired her when she was younger. Even now, she felt that life was ten times harder because of her pretty face.

She was a career woman and struggled daily to be acknowledged for her intelligence and hard work. People saw her looks and nice clothes and thought she was a flighty bimbo. She would never forget the day that the new intern saw her at the copy machine and proceeded to give her step by step directions on how to collate like he was talking to a kindergartener before finally taking the stack of papers and doing it himself. He apparently couldn’t tell the difference between a look of blind fury and one of confusion.

Still, with a Masters under her belt and a lot of hard work, she had managed to become a partner at the Kennedy and Carter Law firm. Even with her diligence, Artemesia was the subject of many rumors.

“Looks like all you need to succeed is a pretty face.”

“I wonder what kind of services she provided to get to the top.”

Each cold remark left a new scar.

Wishworth Castle provided her with a much-needed vacation and some time to focus on herself. She couldn’t remember the last time she just let the world go and gave herself breathing room. Being pampered allowed Artemesia to feel every bit a princess.

She hopped out of the tub and wrapped the luxurious robe around her. Her stomach rumbled telling her that she had gone far too long without eating. Without a doubt, she knew that on the other side of the door would be a little silver tray.

The staff had yet to make a single error since her stay. Everything was flawless, like a well-oiled machine. The filet mignon was grilled to perfection, tender, juicy and rare… just the way she liked it. It went perfectly with the bottle of Petite Sirah that accompanied it on the tray.

Artemesia enjoyed the rest of the bottle while reading in front of the fireplace. She secretly hoped that the sleepy feeling that it left would help calm her nightmares and allow for a full night’s rest. Instead, she found herself restless with a yearning to admire the perfect night sky which couldn’t be seen in the city.


 Navigating the castle at night in her stumbling state was not an easy task. The halls were long and there were plenty of furnishings and shiny suits of armor that jutted out for her to bump into. Thankfully, the path had remained illuminated and stood out from the rest of the darkened castle.

When she finally made her way to the garden, she plopped to the ground ever so ungracefully. She let out a laugh when she realized that she was still in her bathrobe. Anyone would think she wasn’t quite there to see her in such a state. She didn’t care.

The air carried the scent of numerous blooms. Depending on the way the wind blew, she could smell lilac, roses, and other flowers which she couldn’t name off the top of her head. She laid her head down, wet hair and all, and just gazed up at the stars. Their vastness surrounded her and enveloped her.

Even at a young age she had gazed at the stars in curious wonder. The fact that they were nothing more than balls of gas burning billions of miles away did nothing to reign in her interest. There was no end to them, stars and blackness flowed out past the bounds of infinity, frozen in a beauty that man could never achieve. It was beauty that was free of discrimination, hate and violence. The stars were blindingly pure.

“Excuse me. Am I interrupting?”

“Oh, Joe you gave me such a start,” Artemsia said as she blushed ten shades of red and clutched at her robe, embarrassed at her improper condition. Couldn’t someone catch her being normal at this godforsaken place?

“Nice night, aye? I have to admit, I’m a bit jealous of the stars. Age doesn’t faze them and they don’t have any regrets. They are the same night after night. We are the ones that change and there is no stopping it. But, don’t mind an old man’s rambling.”

“I don’t mind. It sounds quite a bit similar to a young girl’s ramblings.”

 “So what brings you out of our gorgeous castle to contemplate the stars?” he asked.

Armetrias wasn’t the type to confide in people, especially not a man, no matter how frail they seemed. The wine had allowed her to let her guard down enough to be comfortable around him, but her secrets were locked up too deeply to be dragged out of her.


 “I can see you aren’t really in the talking mood. Perhaps, you are more the listening type. It has been so long since anyone has listened for me. Do you mind?” he said with a longing in his voice that hinted at the fact that “anyone” was a specific someone.

Comments (1 to 10 of 18)

Jim Bessey
Oct 29, 10 at 01:12 AM
Great job on Chapter Two, Ann -- this is getting REALLY good, really quickly. Love it.
Glory Lennon
Oct 26, 10 at 10:44 PM
Thank you, Doreen. Wanna give it a go? Hmmm? ;-)
Doreen Martel
Oct 26, 10 at 10:16 PM
Nice job ladies ;)
Glory Lennon
Oct 26, 10 at 05:53 PM
Thank you, Jim. I think we shall let Ann take a shot with chapter 2. What fun! Go at it, Ann-baby. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Ann Hinds
Oct 26, 10 at 03:13 AM
Can I take a shot at chapter 2? I have an idea.
Jim Bessey
Oct 26, 10 at 02:34 AM
What a wonderful start, Glory! So many elements of our very own Castle here, brought perfectly to life. So, who's courageous enough to tackle the all-important Chapter Two?
Glory Lennon
Oct 25, 10 at 08:54 PM
Well, Doreen, the things, that it is what it is as it goes. And if that's not quite clear...well, then you'll just have to see, won't you? I just finished the first chapter, will press publish in a bit and then we shall go from there.
Doreen Martel
Oct 25, 10 at 06:09 PM
Was a title/theme selected...I've read this a couple of times and can't seem to figure out if there is one or not LOL
Glory Lennon
Oct 25, 10 at 04:57 PM
Good to have you, Ann.
Ann Hinds
Oct 25, 10 at 02:00 PM
I'm in. Sounds like great Fall entertainment.

Table of Contents

Cast of Characters

Chad Henderson: A 35 year old man, recently divorced and bankrupt with seemingly nothing to live for.

Glenna: Head of household staff, middle aged, slightly plump with gray hair which won't stay in place.  She makes sure that everything in the castle is perfect at all times.

Essie - An idealistic, eager to please and willowy young adult with long brown hair, who works with Glenna in the kitchen and does the running that Glenna does not have time to do.

Simon - Slightly older than Essie and does much of the outdoor work. He's curious about the things around him and looks for answers to his questions that Glenna does not think he needs to know.

Artemisia Claybourne- A 29 year old woman with untold misery who attempts to hide it behind a cheery disposition. 

Charles- The long-time gardener at Wishworth now in love with Rebecca.

 

Rebecca- The newest member to the house staff, in love with Charles.

Sir Joseph Grayson- An elderly gentleman with a fondness for old books and brandy.

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